Act 1 of "The Ascent of Jabal ad Dukhan

Hi Dad,(Keith)

Wow, that was something. I'm still laughing from the video. The student with the hat (Thamer) was really getting into it. And so was the student with the scarf (Mohammad.) I like how (Thamer) assumed the role of the taxi driver and even improvised. It looks like they were enjoying it, the bargaining looked very natural. I really like to hear them say "Jabal ad Dukhan" and "Bahrain," it just flows from their tongue.

I'm glad everyone enjoyed it. That motivates me to keep writing stories.

Matthew (Author of the story)